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Regards sur un temps
Tous se contrent sans converger,
Chemins divergents
Pour amener
Vers d'autres adjacents.

Ô pleurs de la mer
Et désespoir,
De voir cette Terre
Comme un cauchemar.

Visions de ce monde
Regards échangés, ressentis,
Humeurs vagabondes
Dites épanouies
En voyageant sur l'onde.


ʆé Ƿandrere, Juillet 2013.
Poetry in French, the text says:

Snapshots of a time
All crossing without converging,
divergent paths
to bring
To other adjacent.

O tears of the sea
And despair,
Seeing this Earth
Like a nightmare.

Visions of this world
Exchanged glances, felt,
moods wandering
called blooming
traveling on the wave.
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Azenetha Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dude, was you thinking of Vois sur ton Chemin? :P though I don't understand that much, I believe it could be sung time the melody :) now when I've poisoned your mind wih that song, I hope no Beyoncé will make a version of it! ;) though I will have the honour of singing it ;D
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Writer
Yes I kept it in mind xD I started writing, following this particular rhythm, and then I improved the text again and again and over again... and finally the result has nothing to do nearly (beside from the first stanza) with the first version^^ and I have to say, I'm quite happy of it :)
You just reminded me of the song, I remember I already loved it whenI watched the film :D Have you seen the film?
Oh please don't tell me about Beyoncé singing anything xD I'm gonna throw up!!!
Good luck if you want to sing it! ;)
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Azenetha Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, you did a veeeeery good job there! ;) :D and thought most french seem ugky to me, I can tolerate this :3 ;P 
And I haven't watched the film yet... But I'm planning to do this week! ^^
Oh noh, and Beyoncé's version is aweso... I mean dreadful= XP but there is still some fans of her version O.o I really don't get it :c maybe someone ate her tiramisu ;)
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Writer
Hope you've liked the film, sorry for the late...
You know, there will always be fans of Beyoncé... fan of what skill in her, i don't know, but there will always be some :/
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Azenetha Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahaha, I've still not managed to watch it... but was on a busy trip and so on... :) and I couldn't record the French song, because my recorder thing had no battery:/ another time!
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Writer
Ah you should watch it!!!!!! It's a really good film, the only good French film xD 
okay no problem ;) :)
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Azenetha Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe, once I watched an actually GOOD french film! :O I d not remember what it was called, neither can I summarize it... XD hehe, I just do not have any time at the moment ;( in the first weeks of the last school class we have s many homeworks :/ mahh, I have the weekend :D
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Writer
Was it The Artist, or a funny film called OSS 117 with a spy? These the only few that are well done I think^^ there might be other, but I don't know them :/

I remember the time I had to go to school, it was a long time ago... 2 months ago precisely xD Now I have to go to university, it is no difference I think xD ^^ just another bigger school... and I want to become a teacher and I hate school... am I mad???!! xD
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
This is quite beautiful! Did you write this? I prefer the French version. :)
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sewandrere Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Writer
thanks :) I wrote at 3 o'clock this morning as I couldn't sleep^^ I'm pretty proud of it I have to say^^ 
Of course the rimes couldn't be translated into English :/ This can be sung in French, on the hymn of 'Vois sur ton Chemin' ( www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nuywf1… ), that's how I wrote it, respecting the rhythm of the original, but with my writs and 'visions' on the world :)
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